Disgust — Poem analysis

Hazel McKayCheerful

I bite my toes I pick my nose Why do you stare at me? You never care For others there At least I give and give.

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Hazel McKay's poem is six lines long, and most of it is a defence speech. The speaker owns up to two small bad habits, biting toes and picking a nose, and then turns on the person watching. The central idea is that disgust depends on who is judging. The speaker is caught doing something unmannerly, but the poem argues that the colder act is the onlooker's, because someone who stares and "never cares" may be worse than someone who picks their nose. The word "disgust" never appears in the lines themselves. The title hands it to the reader, and the poem quietly asks whom it belongs to.

The opening couplet, "I bite my toes / I pick my nose," sounds like a playground chant. The rhyme of two body parts is simple and bouncy, and each line has just two beats: *I BITE my TOES, I PICK my NOSE*. There are no commas and no apology, and the lack of punctuation makes the confession flat and unembarrassed. The speaker reports these habits the way someone might list their hobbies. Then comes the only question in the poem, "Why do you stare at me?", and the verb matters. "Stare" is where the disgust actually happens. The habits are private and trivial, but the look turns them into a public judgment.

The second half mirrors the first. Another rhymed couplet, "You never care / For others there," follows the same short, two-beat pattern, but now the subject has switched from "I" to "you." The accusation is blunt, and the word "there" is worth pausing on. It could simply be a convenient rhyme, but it also gives the line a sense of distance, as if the onlooker's concern never reaches the people over *there*, wherever they are. The poem doesn't say who those others are, and that gap lets the reader supply their own.

The final line, "At least I give and give," carries most of the poem's emotional weight. "At least" is a defensive, modest phrase. The speaker doesn't claim to be admirable, only better than the person staring. The repetition of "give and give" can be read two ways. It may be proud, a claim to endless generosity, or it may be tired, the sound of someone who keeps handing things over and gets only stares in return. McKay never says what is given, whether kindness, effort, or something less definable, and the vagueness keeps the line from becoming a neat moral. It also sets "give" against "care," so that giving and caring become the poem's measure of worth, with manners left out of the count.

The form supports this. Lines 3 and 6 are the only ones with three beats instead of two, and they are also the only unrhymed lines. "Me" and "give" are the speaker's most exposed words, one ending the plea and one ending the defence, and neither finds a partner. The tidy rhymes go to the toes and nose and to the onlooker's failure to care, while the speaker's own voice is left without an echo. The final line makes up for this by echoing itself, "give and give," as though the speaker must supply the repetition because nobody else will.

The poem never says who is speaking. A child caught in the act is one possibility, and so is any person whose private habits have been noticed in public. That is an inference, since the text offers no biography, but the nursery-rhyme jingle supports it: the childlike sound makes the speaker seem both innocent and sharp. The poem's significance lies in this compression. In six short lines it shows how easily a stare passes for moral authority, and it leaves the reader to decide whether the defence holds. We are also implicated, because anyone who finds the first two lines faintly gross has done a little of the staring too. The speaker's argument is a small one, "at least I give," but it is hard to dismiss.

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