Blasphemy — Poem analysis

Jake NewlandContemplative

Helpless against the wind of time The scars of reason smother me Because what we wanted was the same Though worlds apart- The things that really disturb me, When I think about it deeply Is how similar two people can be Without even wanting to And how they can look at the same clouds, Seeing different faces-

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Two people want the same thing and still end up worlds apart. Jake Newland's "Blasphemy" circles that puzzle in ten short lines without ever solving it. The speaker feels "helpless against the wind of time," and the poem doesn't say who the "we" in the third line is, or what they wanted. That vagueness works in its favour. The poem is about the shape of the problem rather than its particulars: closeness of desire does not guarantee closeness of lives, and likeness can be a source of distress rather than comfort.

The opening couplet is the most ornate stretch, and its images pull against each other. Wind suggests air and movement, but the "scars of reason" "smother," which suggests the opposite, a lack of air. Reason, normally what we use to get clear of confusion, has left marks, and now it suffocates. The speaker seems to have thought their way into a corner. Then comes "Because," a word that promises an explanation: what we wanted was the same, "Though worlds apart." Notice that the logic is a little broken. Sharing a wish doesn't obviously explain helplessness, and the poem seems to know it. The "because" is more a confession than a proof.

After the dash at "apart-" the voice changes. The language relaxes into something close to speech: "The things that really disturb me, / When I think about it deeply." These are plain, almost hesitant phrases, and the grammar slips a little, since "things" is followed by "is." That slip may well be accidental, but it suits a speaker thinking out loud and losing track of the sentence. Where the opening was built from metaphor, this section states its worry directly. What disturbs the speaker is "how similar two people can be / Without even wanting to." The word "wanting" matters here. It echoes "wanted" in line three, and the poem is full of w-sounds (wind, what, we, wanted, was, worlds, without, wanting), as if the whole thing were murmuring about wanting. The cruel twist is that similarity arrives involuntarily. Neither person chose it, and neither can use it to close the distance.

The final image is the poem's best. Two people "look at the same clouds, / Seeing different faces." Anyone who has lain on grass and picked out shapes in the sky knows the experience: one person sees a dragon, another a face, and neither can make the other see it. The image carries the whole argument in miniature. The object is shared, and the interpretation is private. It also explains the earlier "worlds apart" without stating it. People can stand under one sky and still live in separate ones, because each projects a different inner life onto the same blank material.

The punctuation reinforces this. Both the third-stanza-like turn ("worlds apart-") and the last line ("different faces-") end on a dash instead of a full stop. The poem never closes its sentences, so it never delivers a verdict. There is no rhyme and no steady metre, and the line lengths wander. Still, a faint echo of long "e" sounds runs through "smother me," "disturb me," and "can be," which gives a quiet, repeated sigh at the ends of key lines. The sound is barely there, which suits a poem about almost-matches.

The title is the real puzzle, because the word "blasphemy" appears nowhere in the text. Judging by the poem, one reading is that the speaker's realisation is itself a kind of transgression. If we want to believe that shared desire should join people, then admitting it doesn't feels like betraying something sacred. Another reading is that the "blasphemy" is the speaker's refusal to accept a neat, comforting explanation. The poem doesn't settle this, and it is more interesting for leaving the question open.

What makes the poem worth reading is its honesty about a small, uncomfortable truth. It doesn't offer consolation or a lesson. It turns a feeling most people have had, of being almost understood, into one clear picture of clouds and faces, and then stops, mid-thought, on a dash.

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