Never Let Them in By: Jacob B. — Summary

i wake up, look around and all i see are a couple frowns i stretch my toes, stretch my legs, and crack my neck i look down at my feet and i realize i don’t make a print i start to fall into darkness, where every turn is the wrong path i wake up look around and all i still see is a couple of frowns i can’t scratch em, i cant drink em, all away they are always just there to mock me from the back i can’t shake em, i just can’t shake em i feel them poking on my shoulder, just so i take a look at there face but there face is just darkness, no other feeling besides sadness the frowning faces soon close in now my thoughts are all just sins the way i walk, the way i talk, are never my own intentions it’s the ones who closed in and took me by surprise now i am the one that sits on the bench, waiting for my turn to pitch

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The speaker wakes up each morning surrounded by frowning faces they can't get rid of. They stretch and crack their neck like any ordinary start to the day, but then notice they leave no footprint, which suggests they feel invisible or unreal. From there the poem slides into darkness, with every turn leading the wrong way.

The frowns act like a crowd of judges. They mock from behind, poke at the speaker's shoulder, and when the speaker turns to look, their faces are blank and dark, showing only sadness. As they close in, the speaker's thoughts turn guilty ("all just sins") and their actions no longer feel like their own. The ending, sitting on the bench waiting to pitch, suggests being sidelined and left out of their own life.

The mood is anxious, trapped, and lonely. The repeated "i can't shake em" gives it a sense of being stuck. The title's warning, "Never Let Them in," hints that the speaker let these judging voices take control.

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