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I surfaced the other day coming up for air and rubbing shoulders in culture discovering what I never

saw before too close to the forest and not isolated getting enough solitude to see life has become so cheap

attention goes for nothing like seconds that never come back just keep ticking away I think it was during football

with each turnover time out commercial break where we spend our attention without anger rising being directed

to all the ways some parting with money will bring happiness ask your doctor if it’s right for you so you can

walk in total serenity surrounded by lovers and family in your old age driving a perfect high tech car on empty city streets or

mountain passes through snow bringing Christmas to the warm light and happy people within a remote cabin

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The speaker has stepped away from the noise of modern life and, coming back, sees it with fresh eyes. Time alone gives him distance, and from that distance he realizes how cheaply attention is being spent. Seconds tick away and never return, yet we hand them over without a thought.

He places this realization in front of a football game, with its turnovers, time outs and commercial breaks. The ads promise happiness for a price, and the line "ask your doctor if it's right for you" borrows the language of drug commercials to mock how everything gets pitched as a cure. The dream that follows is almost comic in its perfection: loving family, a high-tech car, empty roads, a snowy cabin glowing at Christmas.

The mood is quiet, wry and a little weary. The speaker doesn't shout, and the missing punctuation and drifting line breaks make the thoughts feel like a slow, tired stream. The poem suggests that the happiness being sold is a polished picture, and that real attention is worth far more than we treat it.

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