How To Escape The Ones That Hold You Down — Summary

Jamie LurayInspired

She no longer Could see the joy the child would But squinted and pushed harder For the goal impossible to achieve.

Dozens of eyes Demanded more than she could handle And it didn't take long For them to brake her dreams.

She no longer Wanted to even try For they always pulled her down And dragged her through the dirt.

Dozens of eyes But why did she care When no matter how hard she tried They made sure she'd always fail?

She no longer Let them hold her down While they make her just like them And it wasn't long, before she stood again.

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Told in the third person, the poem follows a young woman worn down by people who never stop judging her. At first she loses the simple joy she had as a child and starts squinting and straining toward a goal that can't be reached. The "dozens of eyes" that keep returning suggest a crowd of critics, always watching, always expecting more than she can give. They break her dreams, pull her down, and drag her through the dirt.

The mood is heavy and discouraging for most of the poem, and the repeated "She no longer" makes her loss of hope feel like a slow slide. In the middle she even asks why she should care when they've made sure she'll fail. Then the last stanza turns. She stops letting them hold her down, and sees they want to make her just like them. The final line is quiet but hopeful: it "wasn't long" before she stood again. The ending suggests that recognizing what they were doing was the first step to getting free.

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