Cry — Summary

I don't know who you are But you can have my battle scars erase them from my skin erase them from within

I don't know who I am

But I won't touch the sky again Take me to a better place Take me to a friendly face

I need to know that someone cares I must ignore the laughs and stares To be free as a butterfly To be free to cry

Tears seem to evade me

Hoping a higher power saves me So that my ducts can sigh again So I can grieve my broken friend

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The speaker in "Cry" is hurting and wants relief, but can't quite get it. They begin by talking to an unknown "you," asking for their "battle scars" to be erased, both on the skin and "from within." The scars suggest pain that is emotional as well as visible. The speaker also admits to feeling lost: "I don't know who I am," and says they won't "touch the sky again," which sounds like a loss of hope or freedom.

As the poem goes on, the requests get simpler. The speaker wants a better place, a friendly face, and proof that someone cares, while trying to ignore "the laughs and stares" of others. The final stanza holds the central problem: tears won't come. The speaker hopes a higher power will let them cry again so they can grieve "my broken friend." The mood is raw, tired, and quietly desperate. Crying is treated as a release the speaker badly needs, and the poem ends with that need still unmet.

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