Number #2 — Summary

Jay_1318Romantic

Heroin, cocaine, whiskey, Intoxicating, dangerous, brilliant, vibrant. Sunflowers, orchids, red, black, green, white, Safe, happiness and home, musk, content.

The way we dance in secret, under the midnight sun, Silent promises and love filled smiles, So completely enchanted by one another.

Whispered truths and frightful dreams, Animalistic urges, gentle caresses, Primal sounds and tender kisses Spasmodic movements, heated breath.

More More Need Lust Us

Erratic, extravagant, wild and wonderful, Volcanic passion but pure friendship, Love is not a word, It's a dance.

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Love here is first described through opposites. The opening lines set drugs and whiskey, words that suggest danger and intoxication, beside flowers, colours and the feeling of home. The speaker seems to be saying that this relationship is both thrilling and safe, a rush and a comfort at once.

The middle of the poem moves from secret dancing and quiet promises into something physical and raw. Whispers and nightmares sit beside animal urges and tender kisses, and the short, stacked words "More / Need / Lust / Us" read like a rising pulse. Notice that the list ends on "Us," as if desire finally turns into connection.

The final lines pull back and settle. The speaker calls the love wild and extravagant, yet rooted in friendship, and ends by saying love "is not a word, / It's a dance." The mood is breathless, sensual and joyful, with a hint of risk running underneath. Love, to this speaker, is something you do together, not something you simply say.

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