Revolution — Summary

Does a revelation feel like this? Does it burn hot and fall to dust in my hands? I am clouded with ideas from novels and poetry That turns all of my daydreams in to prize winning notions. But I still taste the dirt when I eat with my fingers. I am polluted and tampered with and there is no justice here I have fallen through the hands of so many Come out looking like some badly beaten, fighting-mad dog. There is no cause for sympathy. I am rudimentary and underscored And this audience is getting bored I just want to wash it away and start again Turn off the loud speaker that speaks so distantly Even though I know the voices are calling to me I can’t be bothered anymore With revelation I’ve got a revolution to plan.

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The speaker begins by asking what a moment of sudden insight is supposed to feel like, and the answer is disappointing: it flares up and crumbles to dust. Books and poems have filled their head with grand ideas, but real life still tastes of dirt. They feel worn down, passed from hand to hand, and they describe themselves as a beaten, fighting-mad dog who doesn't deserve pity.

The mood is weary, bitter and restless. There's a sense of being watched, with an audience that is bored and a distant loudspeaker whose voices the speaker admits are calling to them, even as they tune them out. The final lines turn the poem sharply. Instead of waiting for a neat moment of understanding, the speaker rejects "revelation" altogether and chooses action. The last line is short and defiant, and it suggests that anger and exhaustion are about to become a plan for change.

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