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Jen CzahurContemplative

Sideways and out of reach Never two thoughts meet As the cold night sets in

Technology driven Hard drives and soft wares And bottles representing sadness In a pyramid-shaped pile on the floor

Lonely, but we never say lonely

Family ties and subtle cries From this house she’s driven To arms that will submit But will not cater

From the river basin To the poles There is no distance Only footprints and negotiations

This is the angle at which we find The point at which we collide And the time for each of us to decide That we will no longer choose to hide

And that nothing here Needs be forgiven

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Jen Czahur's poem pictures a household where people live close together but never quite reach each other. Thoughts don't meet, the night is cold, and screens and gadgets fill the space. The pile of bottles on the floor, shaped like a pyramid, hints at sadness that has been left to build up. The line "Lonely, but we never say lonely" captures the central problem: everyone feels it, and no one admits it.

The poem then widens out. A woman is driven from the house, toward arms that "will submit / But will not cater," which suggests comfort that is offered without real care. Distance, from river basin to poles, stops mattering, because what separates people isn't geography.

The ending turns hopeful. The speaker talks of a point where "we collide" and a moment to stop hiding. The final lines, "nothing here / Needs be forgiven," feel like a quiet release. The mood moves from cold and isolated to honest, calm, and tentatively open.

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