Last Moments — Summary

Jerry KraftRomantic

“Closer” you say, from less Than six inches away, the end Of the weary, long day, at last At rest. The best rare moments, we talk This way, with heads on pillows, face Each other. Face each other, soft voices In sounds sleeping gray, sometimes Important, often just touching, topics From the day, anything else left to say, Before sleep, before love, before Anything that matters gets away. I speak “Are you thinking of a date?” and I watch and wait, no clouds rise up, no Silences contained. Easy as breathing, your Sweetest, intimate way, neither hurry Nor delay. “Closer” you say.

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Two people lie facing each other at the end of a tiring day, and the poem stays inside that quiet stretch before sleep. The speaker treats these bedtime talks as among the best moments they share. The conversation is low and unhurried, sometimes about something important, often just a way of touching through words. What matters is the closeness, not the topic.

The speaker seems deeply content and also a little protective. The lines "before sleep, before love, before / Anything that matters gets away" suggest a quiet awareness that such moments can slip by. When the speaker asks, "Are you thinking of a date?", there is no tension in the reply, no "clouds" or uneasy silences. Everything feels "easy as breathing."

The mood is gentle, tender and settled. The poem ends where it began, with the partner saying "Closer," which makes the whole thing feel like a small, repeating circle of trust.

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