Furnishings — Poem analysis

Jerry KraftRomantic

“You are my everything,” I whisper.

“I’m not your chair,” she laughs.

But where else would I sit when I can no longer stand?

My chair, my table covered with food and a half-burnt candle;

my bed, my pillow holding up the heavy freight of dreams;

my closet filled with costumes, my dresser of bundled socks, my basement of musty smells and unhealthy seeping waters.

You are my lamp, the saucer beneath my evening tea, the mirror at the end of the hall.

Such ordinary furnishings one might mistake the place for being empty, when all I have is what you are.

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"You are my everything" is the kind of line that has been said so often it hardly means anything. Jerry Kraft's "Furnishings" gets its energy from taking the phrase at its word. The woman in the poem laughs it off ("I'm not your chair"), and the speaker answers by listing what "everything" would actually contain. The result is a love poem that sounds more honest than most, because it admits how much need is tangled up in the love.

The speaker's reply to her joke is a question: "But where else would I sit / when I can no longer stand?" The poem never says why he cannot stand, so the reason stays open. It could be tiredness, grief, illness or age. Whatever the cause, the line moves the poem from flirtation to dependence. She hears a compliment turned into an object. He means that he is worn out and she is what holds him up.

The central device is the list, and it is carefully ordered. The first items are comforts: a table "covered / with food and a half-burnt candle," a bed, a pillow "holding up / the heavy freight of dreams." The word "freight" makes dreams into cargo, so even sleep is work, and the pillow has to bear the load. Then the inventory turns less flattering. The closet is "filled with costumes," which suggests the roles he plays in daily life. The dresser holds "bundled socks," a small, faintly comic image of order. The basement has "musty smells / and unhealthy seeping waters." Here the house starts to look like a psyche, with the neglected, damp, half-hidden part underneath. Since the speaker says "my basement," he seems to be handing her the whole building, flaws included. Love in the poem does not mean only the lit rooms.

The grammar changes as the list goes on. The long run of "my … my … my" is possessive, almost greedy, and the semicolons pile the items up without pause. Then the phrasing shifts to direct address: "You are my lamp, the saucer / beneath my evening tea, the mirror / at the end of the hall." The echo of the opening "You are" is deliberate. Lamp, saucer and mirror are quieter than chair and bed. A lamp gives light, a saucer catches what spills, and a mirror at the end of a hall shows you to yourself just as you leave the house. These are the things you hardly notice until they are missing, which may be the poem's whole idea about intimacy.

The form fits this. There is no rhyme and no regular meter, and the diction is plain and speech-like. The stanzas begin as single lines of dialogue, widen to couplets, then to a four-line, a three-line and a four-line stanza, as if the speaker's confidence grows once he is allowed to explain. The sound is gentle but not decorative. "Musty smells" and "seeping waters" slide together on soft s sounds, which makes the dampness almost audible. The line breaks also do quiet work. "Such ordinary furnishings / one might mistake the place / for being empty, when / all I have is what you are" holds back its turn until the word "when," so the reader first believes the room is bare and then learns it is full.

That final line is subtly double-edged. He says "what you are," not "who you are," and the choice keeps the furniture metaphor alive to the end. It could be an accident of phrasing, or it could be the poem's reminder that being someone's everything means being used, leaned on and sat upon. The speaker never directly answers her objection. He simply shows what her absence would leave: an empty house that looks furnished only because she is in it.

The poem is significant because it renews a worn-out phrase without discarding it. It keeps its tenderness and humor (her laugh is part of the scene) while admitting that love can be heavy and not always flattering to the person receiving it. Its images come from the most ordinary places, a kitchen table, a saucer, a hallway mirror, and it makes a quiet argument that devotion shows itself in such places far more than in grand declarations.

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