for Ouma Elsie — Summary

Joshua KlinkContemplative

Mama

Be still and listen to the rain tonight And the sound of a million water droplets Tell me if this truth feels rather artificial As we become our emotions' puppets

Be still and listen to the wind tonight And the hoots of a million haunting ghosts Tell me how this thorn of truth pierces As we gather our emotions on foggy coasts

Be still and listen to the thunder tonight And the clamour of a million clapping clouds Tell me how truth made us fall from the skies As we hide our emotions from jovial crowds

Be still and listen to the storm tonight And the rage of a million wrangling roars Tell me if truth will ever cease to compel As we battle our many emotional wars

Be still and listen to our cries tonight And the tremblings of a million torn voices Tell us whether to accept this brutal truth of time As we yield to our emotions, to these noises

Be still and listen, Mama.

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Addressed to "Mama" and marked as a dedication to Ouma Elsie, the poem is a plea to sit quietly and listen. In each stanza the speaker names a different kind of weather: rain, wind, thunder, a storm. Each one is linked to a hard "truth" and to feelings that are difficult to manage. The weather starts gentle and grows louder, and the emotions grow with it, from feeling like "puppets" to fighting "emotional wars."

The truth is never spelled out. Judging by the phrase "brutal truth of time," it may be about loss, ageing or grief, but the poem leaves that open. The speaker moves from "me" to "us" and then to "our cries," so the pain seems shared, not private. The mood is heavy, restless and sorrowful, with a sense of people hiding their feelings from "jovial crowds." The short last line, "Be still and listen, Mama," drops the storm imagery and becomes a quiet, direct appeal.

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