love of you — Summary

joystylessRomantic

unsteady breaths the only thing that keeps me even unsteady heart beat soft lips I'll never get to touch society over rules laughs too loud kept me calm skin I'll never get to feel I want to touch I want to feel I need to steady myself for the love of god I can't I won't I need you

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Written as a string of short, broken lines, the poem captures the ache of wanting someone the speaker can't have. Everything circles around the body: breath, heartbeat, lips, skin. The speaker keeps naming what they will "never get to touch" or "feel," and the repetition makes the wanting seem both physical and hopeless. The line "society over rules" is hard to pin down, but it hints that something outside the two people, perhaps social expectations, stands in the way. That is an inference, since the poem never says it outright.

The mood is breathless and unsteady. Early on, calm comes from small things like uneven breathing and laughter that is a bit too loud, as if the speaker is holding themselves together. By the end that control gives way. "I can't / I won't / I need you" ends the poem in a plain, desperate admission, with no neat resolution. The lack of punctuation and the short lines make it feel like a confession said in one shaky breath.

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