Finding Liszto, a poem — Poem analysis

I searched the net's creative commons I wanted new comics, I wanted good ones I found some art, a three year old would draw I found sites, years to lie abandonned Just now I found you, Liszto.

Three frames stand upon the page "This song's among my best" "This song's my worst" "This song's my best, so far" This cartoon was your last, Liszto.

Three years ago a random stranger paused to comment on your page "I really enjoy these. Keep it up! K." I wish you had, you showed promise. I see it, K. saw it. A shame you did not see it, Liszto.

I looked on your works and despaired, but Your greatness, like Ozymandias' is left on the endless page I close your tab to see the next. Goodbye Liszto.

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Julia Clement's "Finding Liszto" begins like a shopping trip. The speaker trawls the "net's creative commons" for "new comics," and the repeated "I wanted... I wanted" has the easy entitlement of a browser who expects to be entertained. Most of what she finds is disappointing: art "a three year old would draw," sites left to lie abandoned. Then the stanza turns on its last line, "Just now I found you, Liszto." The move from "I found some art" to "I found you" shifts from objects to a person, and it is the poem's first quiet surprise.

The second stanza reproduces the captions of Liszto's final cartoon, three frames of shifting self-assessment: "This song's among my best," then "This song's my worst," then "This song's my best, so far." Read in order, they make a small drama of artistic doubt, swinging from pride to disgust and back to cautious hope. "So far" is the cruel phrase, because it promises a future that the next line cancels: "This cartoon was your last." The name Liszto may recall the composer Liszt, and the talk of songs fits that, though the poem never says so. The number three keeps returning too: the three-year-old, the three frames, the comment left "three years ago." Whether or not by design, the repetition gives the poem a tidy, panelled feel.

That comment comes from "a random stranger" signing as K.: "I really enjoy these. Keep it up!" It is the only voice of encouragement in the poem, and the speaker takes it up belatedly. "I wish you had" means "kept it up," borrowing K.'s words to say what K. could not say in time. The line that follows, "I wish you had, you showed promise. I see it, K. saw it," runs several clauses together with commas, as if feeling were outrunning punctuation. Then the stanza drops into the flat, deflated "A shame you did not see it, Liszto."

The form suits the subject. There is no regular rhyme or metre, only short lines of plain speech, closer to a blog post than a lyric. The one steady pattern is the refrain: every stanza ends by naming "Liszto," so the poem becomes four attempts to address someone who cannot answer.

The ending is where the poem becomes most interesting. "I looked on your works and despaired" echoes Shelley's "Ozymandias," whose ruined statue bears the boast "Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!" Clement reverses the situation. Ozymandias demanded awe, but Liszto claimed only "among my best," and the despair belongs to the viewer, who sees talent going to waste. The desert's "endless" sand becomes an "endless page," and the comparison is quietly funny, since a forgotten cartoonist is set beside a king of kings. It also reads as the speaker's attempt to give Liszto a dignity the internet never did.

Yet she cannot hold that dignity for long. "I close your tab to see the next" is brisk and almost brutal after the grand comparison, and the poem makes no excuse for her. The elegy lasts a stanza, and then the search resumes. She has become a second K.: a passing reader who gives a single moment of attention, which is exactly what Liszto lacked. The last line, "Goodbye Liszto," is the shortest in the poem, and without a comma the farewell sounds bare and a little hurried.

What makes the poem worth reading is the kind of loss it captures. Nobody dies in it, and nothing dramatic happens. A creator simply stops updating, and the work stays up, unvisited. Shelley's ruin takes centuries to wear away, but a webpage can be forgotten in a few years. The poem also wisely refuses to explain why Liszto stopped, and the silence leaves the reader wondering, with the speaker, how many other tabs have been closed on someone who showed promise.

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