Believe — Poem analysis

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Curse this world And the people in it Who made me belive in Magic, love and butterfly kisses...

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Four lines, one sentence and a grudge: that is everything K_008 gives us under the title «Believe». Nothing about the writer comes with the poem except that code, so the page has to do all the talking. It says more than its size suggests.

The situation is easy to state. A hurt speaker turns on the world and "the people in it" for teaching them to trust in "Magic, love and butterfly kisses..." The central idea is disillusionment, but of a particular kind. The speaker never claims that magic and love are false. The blame falls on the people who "made me belive", so the curse lands on the teachers of the faith, not on what they taught. That leaves the closing list oddly unharmed. It is the one place where the language softens, and a reader begins to suspect that the speaker misses what was lost more than they hate whoever took it.

The title sets up the first irony. "Believe" is an imperative, the kind of word printed on posters and greeting cards. Beneath it sits a poem that begins with another command, "Curse", and the two orders pull in opposite directions. Reading the poem becomes a way of watching a slogan turn sour. The spelling adds a small wrinkle: the title writes "Believe" correctly, while line three reads "belive". It may simply be a slip, and nothing in the text proves otherwise. Still, it leaves the word looking a little unsteady at exactly the moment the speaker admits to having believed.

The construction is spare. There is no rhyme and no regular metre, but there is a pattern in the line lengths. Counting syllables, the lines run three, six, six, nine. The poem opens clipped and furious, with a verb as its first word and no greeting or setup. Then it widens as memory comes in. Whether planned or not, the shape fits the emotion: anger is brief and needs only three syllables, while longing needs room.

The syntax carries the poem's attitude. "Curse this world" has no stated subject, so the command is addressed to no one in particular. The anger has no fixed target, which makes it sound more like something muttered aloud than something composed. The target also narrows as the lines go on, from the whole "world" to "the people in it", and then to the specific people "who made me" believe. In that last clause the speaker is passive. Belief is something done to them, not something they chose, and that gives the poem its mixture of rage and injury.

Sound ties the ends of the sentence together. "Curse" and "kisses" both open with a hard k and carry a hissing s, so the poem begins and ends on near-echoes. The curse and the kiss feel like two halves of one breath, and the speaker cannot quite pull them apart.

The imagery is concentrated in the final line. It moves from large, abstract nouns, "Magic" and "love", to something tiny and physical. A butterfly kiss, the brush of eyelashes against skin, is about as light as a touch can be. The phrase brings childhood tenderness and an association with fragility, though that second part is an inference from the imagery. "Magic" also belongs to fairy tales, so the list reads as the inventory of a childhood faith. There is a striking mismatch of scale here. The speaker curses an entire world, yet what they grieve is almost weightless. The poem draws its force from that gap.

Then come the three dots. The poem ends without a full stop, as though the curse has run out of energy or the speaker cannot bring themselves to finish the thought. This is a sigh, not a verdict.

What makes the poem worth reading is that it holds bitterness and tenderness in four lines without resolving them. It uses plain speech and no elaborate metaphor, which makes it sound like something said in a bad moment. The title may be the final irony. Someone who truly no longer believed would hardly list the magic so lovingly, and the poem's last stubborn trace of belief sits in the very line that is supposed to be a complaint.

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