Simon says — Poem analysis

Kate stoneCheerful

Simon says be thin. Simon says have clear perfect skin. Simon says have long silky hair. Simon says have a perfect body. Simon says be perfect.

But who cares what Simon says let's just lose his game.

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Most people know "Simon Says" as a playground game. A leader barks out orders, and you obey only when they begin with the magic words. Kate Stone borrows that innocent frame and fills it with very different commands: be thin, have clear perfect skin, have long silky hair, have a perfect body. The poem is about the pressure to look a certain way, and about how that pressure gives orders as though it were simply the rules. Its central idea arrives in the final line. The answer to an impossible authority is not to obey it harder but to stop playing.

The construction is simple, and that is where its force comes from. Five lines open with the same two words, "Simon says", and the repetition works like a drumbeat. Every line is an imperative, with no questions, suggestions or room to disagree. Simon himself is never described. He has no face, only a name taken from a children's game. Judging by the poem, he stands for a vague outside voice of expectation, but Stone never says who he is, and that makes the pressure feel more unsettling, as if it came from nowhere and everywhere.

The list also escalates. It begins bluntly with "be thin", then moves through skin, hair and body, as though a person were being assembled from a catalogue of parts. "Silky" sounds like the language of advertising, a word chosen to sell something. The verbs frame the list neatly: "be" opens and closes it, and "have" fills the middle. Appearance is treated as something you possess and something you are, until the two blur. By the fifth line the body parts have vanished and only "be perfect" remains. The demand has moved from what you look like to who you are.

That word "perfect" appears three times, first as a description of skin, then of a body, and finally as the whole command. Repeated like this, it starts to lose its meaning and to sound less like a goal than a threat. A standard that cannot be reached cannot be won, so the game is designed to make you fail.

Sound plays a small but telling part. "Thin" and "skin" rhyme in the first two lines, giving a sing-song, nursery-rhyme neatness that suits the childish game. Then the pattern is dropped. "Hair", "body" and "perfect" chime with nothing, so the comfort the rhyme promised never arrives. Short lines of five, eight, eight, nine and six syllables keep everything clipped and breathless, like orders called across a field.

The last line breaks that rhythm. It is indented, set apart and noticeably longer, and it runs on without a comma: "But who cares what Simon says let's just lose his game." After five barked commands, the sentence tumbles out in a single breath. The tone changes too, from authority to casual speech. "But who cares" is offhand, "just" makes the solution sound easy, and "let's" turns a lone listener into a group. The shrug is the poem's weapon, because it defeats the commands without arguing with them.

The most interesting word is "lose". A poem that began with "be thin" cannot help echoing the phrase "lose weight". Whether or not Stone intended it, the echo turns the idea around, so that the only thing worth losing is the game itself. In a normal game you play to win, but here winning would mean obeying for ever. Losing on purpose becomes the one way out.

What makes the poem significant is how much it does in so few lines. It takes a harmless childhood ritual and uses it to expose how pressure about appearance can pass itself off as a natural rule rather than a choice. The poem does not lecture or blame the reader for feeling the pressure. It points out that the game is rigged, then invites everyone to walk away together. For a young reader, that mix of recognition and lightness is perhaps its greatest strength.

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