Vermillion — Summary

You leave me in stains Marks I will never rid myself of With vermillion veins I bled onto myself, my clothes stained vermillion Forever vermillion

You stain my lungs I constrict and breathe you in Sanguine words paint me free Shackles stained within as we scream Forever sanguine, vermillion

You stain my skin It shrieks, shrill and screeching You stain it black and vermillion with your name, sin The very mark I struggle to hide, bleaching Forever sanguine, black and vermillion

You've stained my memories My own mind I cannot escape You stain them, with useless allegories With everlasting floods upon the mindscape The floods stain it forever sanguine, vermillion

You've stained me I bleed onto myself I breathe you in, us unable to see I bathe my skin in white to drown out your name And we stain each other forever vermillion

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Colour carries the whole poem. The speaker addresses someone who has left a permanent mark on them, and that mark is vermillion, a red that suggests blood, shame, and passion all at once. Stanza by stanza, the stain spreads: to clothes, lungs, skin, and finally memory. Each time, the speaker says it is "forever," so the refrain works like a sentence that can't be appealed.

The feeling is a tangled mix of pain and attachment. The speaker bleeds, screams, and tries to hide the mark, yet also "breathes in" the other person, which suggests they can't fully let go. Judging by the last stanza, the harm isn't entirely one-way: "we stain each other." Even bathing in white, an attempt at cleansing, can't wipe out the name.

The mood is intense and claustrophobic. The repeated lines and the insistent red give it the feel of an obsession that keeps circling back, with no clear way out.

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