2021-01-26: Untitled — Summary

Kids skipping on crash symbol leaves, screams from toothless fiends, lil parasites, fathers return from work at the slaughter factory, some taking pleasure in the activities, passing off pieces of some fractured entity enemy called peace, please please scream the slowly wrinkling brains, concrete crossing across the traincrossing, blue copper patrol buggy, trigger fingies as they like to say, blood splattered suburb trees, and the scream, they scream, but its just another day.

tick tick, another statistic number filed, tick tock, a nine to five in dreadful boxes, clink clank, the unretired surviving fodder struggles to get by, so quick, the moment you realize why, why you feel so close to gutter dying, oh but why oh why are all forces following you.

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Lolo Ohashi's poem paints a suburb where horror has become routine. Children play in fallen leaves, fathers come home from a slaughter factory, police cruise past, and trees are splattered with blood. Screaming runs through it all, yet the closing line shrugs it off: "but its just another day." The speaker seems numbed and angry at how normal this has become, and the jumbled, spitting language, with its slang and clipped phrases, matches that tension.

The second stanza shifts to the grind of work and money. The repeated "tick tick" and "clink clank" sounds feel like a clock and a machine, making life seem mechanical. People are reduced to "statistic" and "fodder," just bodies kept going to get by. The poem ends on a desperate, almost childlike question: why do all forces seem to be following you? The mood is bleak, paranoid and exhausted, a sense of being worn down by a system that offers no escape.

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