XXV - Distorted Light — Poem analysis

I love when during a certain time, the light reflects all over the rooms.

A mirror captured a ray, crystallised the reality, and all of the sudden faded away.

Dreams are crashing down in million pieces where a distorted light seems to appear.

Colours are crumbling windows are trembling, the chamber is disappearing, all it takes is a touch to stop the time, it won't need much.

The million fragments float in the air, make a circle, gather again in moments.

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Most rooms are plain until the sun hits them at the right angle, and Luca Flauto's poem begins exactly there: "I love when / during a certain time, / the light reflects / all over the rooms." The speaker never names the hour. "A certain time" is vague on purpose, as if every reader already knows it from their own life. What follows is the story of how that ordinary glow turns into a small, quiet catastrophe, and then, unexpectedly, into something like renewal.

At its heart, the poem is about how fragile a perceived moment is. In the second stanza a mirror "captured a ray" and "crystallised the reality," freezing light and room together. "Crystallised" cuts two ways. It means made clear and fixed, but it also means turned into something brittle and glassy, and brittle things break. The next stanza obliges: "Dreams are crashing down / in million pieces." What shatters is not the mirror but the dreams, though all the vocabulary belongs to glass. Reality, reflection and dream blur into one another, which suits a poem where the light is "distorted" and only "seems to appear." The hedging verb matters. Nothing here is certain, least of all what is real.

The form follows the same logic. There is no regular rhyme scheme and no fixed metre, only short lines that sit close to speech. The 21 lines break into stanzas of four, three, four, six and four, and the odd three-line stanza holds the one sudden event, the mirror's ray fading away. It is also the only stanza in the past tense. Everything else happens in the present: the opening describes a habit, and then the collapse arrives in a run of continuous verbs, "crashing," "crumbling," "trembling," "disappearing." The grammar slows the breakdown down, so we watch it happen rather than hear about it afterwards.

Rhyme appears only in pockets, as if it too had broken apart. "Crumbling" and "trembling" chime together, and the long fourth stanza closes on "touch" and "much." That last line, "it won't need much," is almost casual, and it is unsettling for that reason. The destruction needs no force, just a touch, and the poem never says whose. Repeated words stitch the stanzas together: "million" returns in the last stanza, "time" appears in the first and again in "stop the time," and "appear" is answered by "disappearing" and "faded away." The poem keeps pairing arrival with vanishing.

The last stanza is the most interesting, because it refuses to end in ruin. After time has been stopped, the "million fragments / float in the air." Judging by the imagery, the picture is something like dust or glitter hanging in a sunbeam, motion suspended. Then the fragments "make a circle" and "gather again in moments." The final word is double-edged. It can mean *within moments*, quickly, but after a poem full of shards it also suggests the pieces are moments, small units of time that regroup into a whole. The collapse is not a full stop, then, and the poem ends on a loop rather than a ruin. Even the slightly unidiomatic phrasing ("in million pieces," "all of the sudden," "stop the time") adds to the unsteady, dreamlike tone.

What makes the poem worth reading is how much it does with so little. It takes a tiny, familiar experience, light moving through a room, and gives it a full arc of beauty, breakdown and reassembly in a handful of plain lines. It also never settles into sentimentality or despair. The speaker says "I love" once and then steps back, letting the light and its fragments carry the poem. The Roman numeral in the title hints that it belongs to a larger sequence, but it stands well on its own. It suggests that moments of beauty are easily broken, yet the pieces keep drifting back together.

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