VII - Staring at the water — Poem analysis

Luca FlautoRomantic

What a weird spring! Days of sunlight, days of heavy rain April is a joker among the months, switching seasons through the hail.

Mistral is blowing hard shaking the light dress of trees, the weak blossoms, the fragile leaves. Oh, that wind! Strong enough to break my lips but not enough to heal the pain.

You hold my hand, making me blush, take me to the park where we can sit and stare at the water. The old bench is floating on that wet mirror, sometimes blue, sometimes grey.

Here we are, sorrounded by the sound of Mother Nature looking each other's eyes the desire of jumping in the blue of the lake, it's an hard decision to make.

Water and sky are one thing hugging in the most pure freedom.

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Spring is supposed to be a promise, but Luca Flauto opens with a shrug of disbelief: "What a weird spring!" The first stanza is built on contrast. Sunlight against heavy rain, and April as "a joker among the months," switching seasons "through the hail." The joker is a good image. It makes the weather a trickster who cannot be trusted, and the poem's real subject is already forming behind it: a world, and perhaps a mood, that will not hold still.

The second stanza darkens that mood. The Mistral, a strong wind, shakes "the light dress of trees, / the weak blossoms, the fragile leaves." Three delicate things in a row, and the trees are dressed like people, so their vulnerability feels human. Then the speaker breaks in: "Oh, that wind!" The exclamation is the poem's most spontaneous moment, and what follows is its most personal: the wind is "strong enough to break my lips / but not enough to heal the pain." The line balances two failures. The wind has enough force to hurt on the surface, yet none of the power to reach a deeper hurt. The poem never says what this pain is. That silence keeps the weather from being mere scenery, because we start to read it as the speaker's inner state.

The third stanza changes direction with one word, "You." A hand is held, the speaker blushes, and the long line "take me to the park where we can sit and stare at the water" stretches out like the sitting it describes. After the clipped, gusty lines before it, the pace slows. The water also gives us the poem's best image: the bench seems to float "on that wet mirror, / sometimes blue, sometimes grey." The bench is solid and old, but the reflecting surface unsettles it. The colours repeat the opening pattern of sun and rain, except that here changeability is something to gaze at rather than suffer through.

Structurally the poem is free verse, with no fixed metre and uneven stanzas of four, six, four, six and two lines. The one clear rhyme arrives at a key moment: "the blue of the lake, / it's an hard decision to make." Rhyme is rare here, so "lake" and "make" feel like a small click of resolve. The word "hard" also echoes the earlier wind that was "blowing hard." The outer force and the inner dilemma share a word, which quietly links them. The fourth stanza also loosens its grammar. "Looking each other's eyes" has no punctuation to steady it, and the sentence drifts. A few slips in the English ("sorrounded," "an hard") are best read as slips, not devices. Even so, the plain, unpolished voice suits a poem about being too absorbed to tidy one's thoughts.

That fourth stanza holds the central tension. The couple are surrounded by "the sound / of Mother Nature," a rather conventional personification, but the stress falls on their gaze and on "the desire of jumping." Jumping into the lake could mean play, escape or surrender, and the poem leaves it open. Whatever it means, the speaker calls it a decision, which suggests that wanting freedom and taking it are different things.

The ending answers the question without settling it. "Water and sky are one thing / hugging in the most pure freedom." The wild opposites of the first stanza (sun and rain, blue and grey, strong and not strong enough) now dissolve into a single picture, since the lake mirrors the sky until the two cannot be told apart. The verb "hugging" matters, because it makes the landscape echo the couple. Freedom here is not escape from pain or weather but merging, being held within something larger. The title, "Staring at the water," points to this. Staring is a way of letting the world and the self blur together.

The poem's significance is modest and real. It does not explain the speaker's pain or dramatise a crisis. It shows how a hand, a bench and a view of water can sit beside unresolved hurt without erasing it. The Roman numeral in the title suggests the poem may belong to a longer sequence, though the text alone cannot confirm that. Read by itself, it ends on an image of calm that has been earned by the turbulence before it.

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