«flickering inside of your mind…» — Summary

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flickering inside of your mind are the dusty hills made of yellow and smiles made of the old times....you move your hands to your pockets and look out,at the cloud atlas your life moves and your lives move and love moves and your loves move and you smile again and the world goes dark for just a moment when you blink(you try to reassure yourself that everything will not be fine....not here you pack your heartbeats,you pack your dirty feet and you leave,over the yellows hills dusty and new,for you they say we won’t leave,we won’t leave and you smile just one more time because you’re there and life is there and love is there and everything that you left behind is there,and the cloud atlas(well, the rest is up to you

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Addressed to "you," the poem follows someone standing on the edge of a departure. Memories flicker through their mind: dusty yellow hills, smiles, "the old times." They put their hands in their pockets and look out at a life that keeps shifting, with love and lives moving in the plural, as if nothing stays one thing for long. The speaker seems to be talking to a person, or perhaps to a part of themselves, and the tone is gentle but uneasy.

The central moment is the decision to go. The person tries to accept that "everything will not be fine," then packs their heartbeats and dirty feet and crosses the hills. The repeated "we won't leave" sounds like a promise from others, or a hope, that the leaving can't quite undo. Still, the person smiles, because life and love and everything left behind are all "there." The poem ends mid-thought, in an unclosed parenthesis: "the rest is up to you." The mood is bittersweet, nostalgic, and quietly hopeful, leaving the future open.

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