Conscious — Summary

In a detrimental space where they'll lie and try to save face, Expecting me to acquiesce Ignore my senses and even gauge my odd eye to shut out consciousness to negate focus But eye never rests, Eye never closes in succumbing to hypnosis of those who swing pocket watches Afront unexpecting patrons who sit still on couches Of the ones only interested in the type of change found in the cushions, and restricting the type that brings peace into fruition

In a detrimental space, I may lie, but eye never rest

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The speaker describes being in a "detrimental space" where people lie, save face, and expect her to go along quietly. They want her to ignore her instincts and dull her awareness. She refuses. The poem plays on "eye" and "I": the eye that never rests is also the self that stays alert and won't be put under.

The pocket-watch image is the poem's sharpest moment. It pictures a hypnotist swinging a watch in front of people lounging on couches, and the speaker casts those in power as manipulators who want others passive. They care only about the loose change in the cushions, small gains, while holding back the kind of change that brings peace.

The ending admits a shift: "I may lie," she says, but "eye never rest." She might bend or stay silent on the surface, yet her awareness stays switched on. The mood is tense and defiant, with quiet pride in staying conscious.

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