Petrarchan Sonnet: Metamorphoses — Summary

LeanneContemplative

When you and I were summer, and the sky was greyer than the green that grew between my linden and your oaken strength, serene, eternal as the shadows passing by. You whispered me a question; my reply was lost upon the winds of might-have-been for change must come to every tranquil scene and gifts from gods are not what they imply

Forever is a dream lost to the dawn and temples fall to dust beneath the years as roses split the stones and oceans dry; yet boughs will bend and brave the tearing thorn to claim the scars as treasured souvenirs, and laugh until the summer, you and I.

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Leanne's sonnet looks back at a past relationship, a time when "you and I were summer." The speaker pictures the two of them as trees: she is a linden, the other person an oaken, steady presence. The memory is tender but unfinished. Someone asked a question, and the speaker's answer was "lost upon the winds of might-have-been," so we're left guessing what was said, or left unsaid.

The second half widens into a meditation on time. Forever is "a dream lost to the dawn," temples crumble, and roses split stones. Yet the closing lines turn hopeful. Boughs bend, survive the thorns, and keep their scars as "treasured souvenirs." The final line imagines laughing "until the summer, you and I," which suggests that the speaker hopes for a return, or at least a peaceful keeping of the memory.

The mood is wistful and quietly resilient: sad about loss, but unwilling to be bitter about it.

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