The way home — Summary

Lucie TamboraContemplative

The tree line's blushing crimson, With a red lens, I'd have won -however, I haven't a thing. If I had much clearer sight, Everything would be more bright And life wouldn't seem like a ring.

The synthetic melodies Still keep buzzing like wild bees -stupefying and purposeless. While they're nice for an hour, They make one lose willpower And fall into deep waves of bass.

Nothing's important today Except to stay a sunray -keep a secret like a master, Lovely poetry, sweet tales Become stock with rising sales -remedy for a disaster.

Black silhouette drawn on glass And a field of drying grass -hello, my old friend, narrow street. The scent of fruits and pastries, Yet another line of trees, A void greeting to keep the beat.

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The speaker walks home through an autumn scene, and the walk becomes a way of looking at a flat, restless state of mind. The trees are crimson, but the speaker feels unable to make the most of them, wishing for a "red lens" or "clearer sight" that might brighten things. Instead, life feels like a ring: circular, repeating, going nowhere.

The middle stanzas point to what dulls the speaker. Synthetic music buzzes like bees, pleasant for an hour but draining willpower. Even "lovely poetry" and "sweet tales" seem turned into products, sold as a quick remedy rather than felt. The speaker wants only to stay quiet and hidden, like a sunray.

The last stanza returns to the street, with its dark silhouette, dry grass, and the smell of fruit and pastries. The greeting to the "old friend" street feels familiar but hollow. The mood is weary, numb, and quietly wistful, with a little beauty still showing at the edges.

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