eyes — Summary

m a c kRomantic

i remember a boy, a beautiful thing, he had everything going for him, but no matter how happy or joyful he seemed, there was something, i know because in his eyes it gleamed, so i asked this boy "what's hidden in your sighs?" and he simply replied "my plain brown eyes."

this made me laugh, but it cause me to think, this is why is happiness tends to sink? but it is not true can he not see, his eyes are beautiful, this cannot be.

so i spoke to this boy, with the chocolate brown eyes and i told him a tale, for i do not tell lies "my beautiful dear friend, i adore your eyes.

for blue eyes aren't stunning, nor glorious or unique. in fact i wish i had your eyes, so unharmful they seem."

this is an ode to the boy with the brown eyes. this is an ode to the boy who wishes for change. this is an ode to the boy for whom i wish to stay the same.

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The speaker remembers a boy who seemed to have everything, yet carried a hidden sadness. When asked what lay behind his sighs, he answered simply: "my plain brown eyes." The speaker laughs at first, then starts to worry. How can someone so lovely believe his eyes are the reason his happiness sinks?

So the speaker answers with honesty. Claiming never to lie, they tell him they adore his eyes, that blue eyes aren't stunning or unique, and that they would happily trade for his. The compliment is warm and a little clumsy, which makes it feel sincere rather than polished.

The ending turns into a three-part ode. The boy wishes for change, but the speaker hopes he will stay exactly the same. The mood is gentle, tender and quietly hopeful. It reads like a friend's reassurance, written to remind someone that what he dislikes about himself is the very thing another person treasures.

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