Fraud — Poem analysis

LillithContemplative

There Is No bigger

Fraud, Than

A Promise not Kept....

So am I a fraud?

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Spread across the page in a zigzag of single words, Lillith's "Fraud" looks like a sentence that has been dropped and left where it landed. Put back together, the opening is a blunt proverb: there is no bigger fraud than a promise not kept. The final line then breaks the pattern. It is a question, set flush and plain: "So am I a fraud?" The poem is about the distance between saying and doing, and its central idea is that a broken promise is a kind of lie, perhaps the worst kind. It does not stop at judging other people. The speaker turns the rule on herself.

The shape on the page does most of the work, since there is no rhyme and no regular metre. Nearly every word is short and heavy, and almost every line holds a single word or two. This forces the reader to move slowly and to hear each word separately. The indentation also follows a pattern. "There," "Is" and "No bigger" drift to the right, then "Fraud" snaps back close to the left margin. "Than," "A" and "Promise" drift out again, and "not" snaps back. The two words that carry the poem's weight, the accusation and the negation, land near the same edge, while everything around them wanders. The effect is like a speaker who keeps losing her footing and then steadies herself on the harshest words.

The line breaks also act out the idea. "A" and "Promise" sit on separate lines, so for a moment the promise stands whole and unbroken. Then "not" arrives on a line of its own, surrounded by white space, and cancels it. It is the smallest word in the poem and the only lowercase one besides "bigger," yet it reverses everything before it. "Kept" follows with a capital letter and a trailing "....", four dots where three would be the usual ellipsis. The sentence never quite finishes. The dots leave a silence in which the reader can fill in what the promise was. The poem never says, so it could be a promise to someone else or one made to oneself.

"Fraud" is the key word, and it appears three times: in the title, in the fourth line and in the last. The French-style quotation marks around it in the title, «Fraud», make it look like a word held at arm's length, as if someone had said it aloud. It is a strong choice. A fraud is a deception, something done on purpose for a false result, and calling a broken promise by that name is deliberately severe. "No bigger" adds to the severity, because the claim is an absolute. The word also has a second, more modern sense, the feeling of being an impostor, of not being who you appear to be. By the last line both meanings are in play. The speaker is asking whether she has deceived someone, and also whether she is what she seems.

The last line works through its first word, "So." It makes the question sound like a conclusion drawn by logic: if a broken promise is the biggest fraud, and I have not kept mine, then what follows? It is notable that the poem doesn't answer. There is no confession and no defence, only a question mark. The poem's grammar has also changed by then. The proverb is stretched out and fragmented, but the question is in ordinary speech, with no staggering and no capitals scattered about. The speaker seems to have stopped performing a rule and started facing it.

That turn is what makes the poem worth reading. Many people will agree with its opening statement, because it sounds like the kind of wisdom you would find on a card. The poem shows how easy it is to judge broken promises in general and how hard it is to apply the same standard to yourself. In under twenty words, it leaves readers with the uncomfortable task of answering the question on their own behalf.

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