Evening Sounds Push Back Time — Summary

Linda BDreamy

Dusk murmurs heard next door, down the street, across the park: My neighbor crosses over the driveway asking ‘how is Sarah getting along?’ (My daughter, due in two months.) I tell ‘she’s fine, getting a little uncomfortable, but feels good still.’

This time, I hear my grandmother, Sarah, call “yoo hoo, Mrs. Judy, how are your tomatoes doing? Mine are not looking so well this year. Lots of bugs, I think.”

Later, across the park, it’s “come home, Charlie, come home. It’s getting dark out, time for bath, time for bed, time for stories.” Then—

“Linda, Linda, are you up in that tree? It’s really too dark for you to be climbing still. Come home now. Is that Alice with you? Alice May, you get on home now. Your momma’ll be worried to death.”

My husband clinks away the rake, the shovels. The broom whispers across the porch, my hands or my mother’s, final work of today?

Mom, come in, come in to visit a while. I hear you sweeping on the porch, at last light, as I turn the pages of my book.

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Dusk in this poem is a time when the present and the past seem to overlap. The speaker listens to the sounds of her neighborhood, and the first voice is real: a neighbor asking after her pregnant daughter, Sarah. Then the sounds begin to slip backward. She hears her grandmother, also named Sarah, calling about tomatoes, and a parent calling a child home for bath, bed and stories. Soon the voice is calling her own name, asking if she is up in a tree, and the speaker is a child again.

The mood is gentle, nostalgic and a little wistful. Evening chores, like her husband's clinking rake and the whispering broom, blur into her mother's work. By the end, the speaker seems to be addressing her mother directly, inviting her in. The poem suggests that family is passed along through names, routines and ordinary sounds, and that dusk is when they feel closest.

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