It started that morning — Summary

It started that morning, When he awoke from the dream. All his sorrows were seeds. His town, a fallow field. Inside his head, it was spring. Time to plant, the voice hissed.

Mother stood in his way, trying to stop What he knew must be done. Time to prune, he thought.

Tools in hand, He found the place Where the children were. The voice roared. The pulse pounded in his ear. He would not fail. It rained Bullets.

They fell. They all fell. And he was the last.

What is left is a field. Flowers weeping every day. Never ceasing.

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The poem follows a man through a mass shooting, told in calm, short lines that make it more chilling. He wakes from a dream, and a voice in his head convinces him that his sorrows are seeds and that his town is a field waiting to be planted. The farming language turns violence into something he sees as ordinary work. "Time to prune" is the most disturbing moment, because he treats killing children as a chore. His mother tries to stop him, but he pushes past her.

The poem never names the act. It only says "It rained / Bullets," and the line break makes the word land like a blow. The speaker seems driven and certain, with no doubt left. Then the poem shifts. "They all fell" includes him, and the aftermath is a field of weeping flowers. The mood is cold, grim, and sorrowful, and the closing image suggests grief that has no end.

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