Mortality — Summary

Marcette, Swamp HagContemplative

Is death a cold embrace? A frigid, barren country From which no soul may Cross its borders to escape.

Or is it a burning coil? A searing fiery serpent That wraps around you As you bake In the scorching sun of summer.

Or could it be a fang of atropine? A toxic, piercing switchblade That slices into your flesh and mind. The cyanide teeth that bite into your blood

Or is it a grotesque plague? To disfigure the mind And body and legacy To be twisted and maimed Into a syphilitic leper?

Is death simply the time Our bodies just break apart and stop? Like a pocket watch Hit with a hammer? Or are we unwound— Left behind to inevitably unravel And stop functioning?

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Marcette, Swamp Hag's "Mortality" never settles on an answer. Instead, the speaker asks question after question, trying out different pictures of what death might be. It could be a cold, barren country with no way out, or a burning serpent coiled around the body under a summer sun. It could be poison, a fang or a switchblade that cuts into flesh and mind. It could be a plague that ruins body and legacy alike, leaving someone a "syphilitic leper."

The last image is the quietest and maybe the most unsettling. Death might be nothing dramatic at all, just a body that breaks or winds down like a pocket watch, whether smashed by a hammer or left to unravel on its own. The speaker sounds anxious and fascinated, circling the subject rather than facing it. The mood is dark and uneasy, and the violent, grotesque images give way to a bleak sense of simple stopping.

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