Last Stand — Summary

Flay off my false skin. You can't see why I like to conceal and highlight my face (Or is it that you refuse to listen) And continue to belittle me. It isn't like anyone, especially me, would care. But I dare you to try to kill my aplomb Attempt to slice away my confidence My confidence to appear cytherean My confidence to enjoy my appearance My confidence to exist in your denial My confidence to rebel against you merely by existing My confidence to kill, no, impale the black hearts of brutes Like you. You can try and you will fail For I am a growing thorn, not a thorn, a spear In the side of you

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Marcette's poem is a defiant answer to someone who mocks the speaker's appearance. It opens with a stark command, "Flay off my false skin," and then admits that the speaker likes to conceal and highlight her face, a choice the other person dismisses or won't listen to. A small, bitter aside, "It isn't like anyone, especially me, would care," hints at hurt underneath the bravado.

From there the tone hardens. The repeated "My confidence to..." builds like a drumbeat, moving from simply enjoying her appearance to rebelling just by existing. The word "cytherean," a nod to Venus and beauty, shows she claims glamour on her own terms. The final image is the sharpest: she corrects herself from "thorn" to "spear," growing bigger and more dangerous in the side of her critic.

The mood is angry, proud and fierce. The speaker turns an insult into fuel and promises that being herself is the strongest form of resistance.

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