«you stand at the edge of a cliff…» — Summary

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you stand at the edge of a cliff just to be free tears falling knowing if you did jump you'll cause pain but you jump into the freezing cold water your eyes closed and your heart broken

but you swim even if your body is ready to give up you swim back to land just to lay down and look at the sky full of stars knowing one day all the pain will eventually go away.

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Written to "you" and signed with the name Maria, this short poem follows someone at their lowest point and then through a slow return. In the first stanza, the figure stands at a cliff's edge, longing to be free and aware that jumping would hurt the people around them. They jump anyway, into freezing water, eyes shut and heart broken. The cold and the closed eyes make the moment feel numb and frightening at once.

The second stanza turns on the word "but." Even when the body wants to give up, the swimmer keeps going, and the repeated "you swim" feels like each stroke is a hard-won effort. Reaching land, they simply lie down and look at the stars. The mood shifts from despair to a quiet, tired calm. The poem ends with hope that is gentle rather than triumphant: the pain won't vanish now, but "eventually" it will. The speaker seems to be offering comfort, perhaps to themselves, that surviving is possible.

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