Wilcox/Hollywood Pantoum — Summary

Here is a gesture. It will explain what I mean to tell you. Watch the tops of the palm trees first, then the windows of buildings.

What I mean to tell you is look where somebody/nobody lives– inside those windows, those buildings. Let each of your eyes slide down

to where somebody/nobody lives, To the bald mannequin on stage. Let each of your eyes slide down to the wig shop. Feel the people

passing each other on the sidewalk the breezes in the spaces between them will batter you a little. What I want you to see is the brazen way summer

comes to Los Angeles; confident, brash in air, on the streets and the tourists, the colors of molten metals running together , tourists running with those colors.

Stare at the bald mannequin on stage. Watch the tops of the palm trees first, then the wig shop. You’ll feel the people… Here is a gesture. It will explain.

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The speaker acts like a guide, urging you to look at a stretch of Los Angeles the way she sees it. She starts with the palm trees, then lets your eyes drop to the windows, the wig shop, and a bald mannequin on display. The repeated phrase "somebody/nobody lives" suggests a place where people are present and invisible at once, like the mannequin, which looks human but isn't.

The pantoum form, where lines come back again and again, makes the poem feel like a loop, as if the speaker keeps pointing because the message is hard to put into words. "Here is a gesture" opens and closes the poem, and the explanation never quite arrives. What she does offer is a feeling: summer arriving "brazen" and "brash," colors running together like molten metal, and passersby whose movement batters you a little. The mood is vivid and restless, a mix of fascination and loneliness, with the city feeling bright, crowded, and strangely empty.

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