OUR HERMITESS — Summary

Mary F. C. PrattContemplative

This sixteenth-century French cabinet was a bequest. Originally to keep wine, it now holds urns of ashes awaiting internment.

And here we have our hermitess. Her door is closed this morning so she will not receive you. Perhaps if you return—

No. She keeps no regular hours, every audience is by chance. I don’t know; no one knows precisely how she spends those days alone. She has ink and paper, needles and yarn, a small black cat with white paws. Sometimes she makes a little book, or socks in brilliant colors that you might glimpse between her long black skirts and her shoes—

Yes, her books are for sale in the gift shop; sometimes she’ll sign one. No. No socks. No, she won’t let herself be photographed. Or sketched. When her door is open, she may let you in. She may let you pet her cat, if you are quiet and ask no questions.

Now down this corridor is the choir room with a beautiful tapestry, very old, of Magdelene in the Resurrection garden. We’re very fortunate to have it in our care.

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The poem is spoken by a guide leading visitors through what seems to be a religious house or similar institution, though the poem never says so outright. The guide points out an old French cabinet now used for urns of ashes, then introduces "our hermitess," a woman who lives there in near-seclusion. Her door is closed, and the guide answers visitors' questions, sometimes correcting them mid-thought ("No. No socks.").

What stands out is the gap between what the guide says and what the visitors want. They are curious and a little intrusive, asking about photographs, sketches, and her private life. The guide protects her, admitting "no one knows precisely" how she spends her days. Only small details slip through: ink, yarn, a black cat with white paws, perhaps bright socks.

The mood is quiet, gently humorous, and respectful of mystery. When the guide moves on to the tapestry, the hermitess stays unexplained, and the poem seems to say that some lives deserve to be left private.

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