THE TRANSIT OF VENUS — Summary

Mary F. C. PrattContemplative

One black calf came, curious, to the fence, the rest grazed slowly through the field. People drove by. Nobody stopped.

The clouds in the west parted just in time. We fitted binoculars with heavy filters and there she was. Our size.

Turning with us around that close yellow star. Dark against that star. For months she’d been yellow against the darkening sky.

We won’t live to see this again. And will anyone ever see us like this– one black spot, turning through the sky, just above the clouds closing in.

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A small group watches a rare astronomical event: Venus passing in front of the sun. The poem begins on earth, with a calf wandering up to a fence, other cattle grazing, and cars passing by without stopping. Almost no one notices what is happening overhead. Then the clouds part, and the speaker and the others look through filtered binoculars and see the planet as a dark dot against the sun. "Our size," the speaker says, which makes Venus feel strangely close and familiar.

The mood moves from quiet wonder to a gentle sadness. The speaker knows this won't happen again in their lifetime, and then turns the view around: seen from far away, the Earth would also be one small black spot, turning in space. The closing image of clouds "closing in" suggests how brief and fragile the moment is. The tone is calm and plain, but it carries a sense of how small and fleeting human lives are.

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