OLD HOUSE — Summary

Mary F. C. PrattMarch 12, 2007Contemplative

Front step broken, front door deeply cracked, generations of paint. Scratches around the keyhole, fingerprints around the knob.

On the hall table a notebook kept by the children: lists of the birds that came, drawings of themselves playing in the snow.

A little too much furniture: rickety tables, soft chairs, iron plant stands that once held potted ferns. A battered dresser with crockery not chipped enough to toss, a few old letters, knick-knackery, a blotted book.

Behind the tattered draperies, on the walls, crayoned drawings the children made: snowmen and cats and sleeping dogs, the smiling sun shining on a cottage with its red roof, ascending smoke.

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The poem walks us through an old house, room by room, and lets the objects tell the story. The step is broken, the door is cracked, and the paint has built up over generations. Yet the details that matter most are small and human: scratches around the keyhole, fingerprints on the knob. Someone has lived here, and used it hard.

Inside, the children are everywhere. There is their notebook of birds and snow games, and crayon drawings hidden behind tattered curtains. The speaker never states a feeling outright, but the tone is warm and tender. The clutter of mismatched furniture and not-quite-ruined crockery suggests a family that keeps things because they are loved. The final picture, a smiling sun over a red-roofed cottage with smoke rising, is a child's idea of home inside a real one. The mood is gentle and nostalgic, with a quiet sense that time has passed, though the house still feels full.

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