PROMPT #11: INVITATION — Summary

We will meet at dawn, at the corner in front of the music store. Dress warmly, even if it isn’t cold. Wear strong shoes. Bring a thesaurus, a pocketful of small stones, a sandwich with no mayonnaise or radishes. Do not wear a wristwatch; a pocket watch is okay. You will not need a water bottle, or matches, or cupcakes. Please remember not to bring a notebook. If you forget, it will be confiscated and not returned. All transportation will be provided, but you will be expected to tip the chimney sweep. Ten percent should be plenty. Expect porta-potties but no phone service. You will be allowed to feed the bears, but giving money to the mimes is strongly discouraged. We will return to the corner promptly at midnight. There should be someone you trust waiting.

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Written as a set of instructions, this poem invites you on an outing that never explains itself. The speaker sounds calm and practical, like a tour guide handing out rules, but the rules make no ordinary sense. Bring a thesaurus and a pocketful of small stones, but no notebook. Wear a pocket watch, not a wristwatch. Tip the chimney sweep, feed the bears, ignore the mimes. The mix of fussy details and fairy-tale oddness makes the day feel like a dream, or a story you are about to step into.

The tone is playful, but something more serious sits underneath. The trip runs from dawn to midnight, and the final line, "There should be / someone you trust waiting," shifts the mood. After all the humor, it suggests the day may be a journey into the unknown, perhaps imaginative or writerly, and that coming back safely matters. The poem leaves you amused, curious, and a little moved.

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