IN THE CAFÉ, WANTING EARPHONES — Poem analysis

Mary F. C. PrattContemplative

This is where I need the earphones that magnify sound: that couple on the sofa, somewhat entangled, occasionally laughing, is talking a little too quietly for me to overhear. The help are talking, too, as they clear the noon-rush clutter. I catch one lover saying three quarters, a customer at the counter the wrong time.

like the sixties North America they all crashed into the rocks day old bagels so it’s just you

Always I want to know the business of strangers, their urgent lives nothing to do with me.

any latté cups rain. And the kittens too far to row haircut, and pink handtowels invited her to speak

I imagine they want to know my business too: who is that woman drinking coffee alone and what is she writing in that book, and why does she stop, stare out the window at the river, and why does she smile?

kept talking and talking more fish except tuna day Carol died understood the agenda expensive to fly

But on my porch, with the earphones, in the evening, in the rain, everything is simple, clear. I hear a hundred robins singing, and the peepers in the pond three-quarters of a mile down the road.

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A woman sits in a café straining to hear a couple on a sofa who are talking "a little / too quietly for me to overhear." Mary F. C. Pratt builds a whole poem out of that small frustration. The speaker admits to a nosiness most people hide: "Always I want to know / the business of strangers." She knows their "urgent lives" have "nothing to do / with me," and the line break after "with" leaves "me" stranded on its own. That stranded word sums up the poem's loneliness. She is close enough to watch the couple but shut out of what they say.

The way the poem is built shows what overhearing is like. The opening stanza is tidy, with a long, careful sentence full of hedging adverbs: the couple are "somewhat entangled" and "occasionally laughing." But as soon as she starts to listen, the grammar gives way. "I catch one lover saying three quarters, / a customer at the counter the wrong time" is two scraps jammed together. After that, blocks of lowercase fragments break into the poem with no capitals and almost no punctuation: "like the sixties / North America / they all crashed into the rocks / day old bagels / so it's just you." They read like bits cut from different conversations and shuffled together. A shipwreck sits beside stale bagels, and "day Carol died" turns up between "more fish except tuna" and "expensive to fly." A death is announced in the same flat tone as a shopping list, and we never learn who Carol was. The poem suggests that even magnified sound would give her only debris, because overheard speech arrives without the context that gives it meaning.

The middle of the poem turns the situation around. "I imagine they / want to know my business too." The line break after "they" works like a hinge, and the speaker becomes the mystery: "who is that woman drinking coffee alone / and what is she writing in that book." The questions pile up, each starting with "and why," until the last and gentlest one: "why does she smile?" Judging by the poem, the book she writes in may well be this poem, which would make the strangers' unanswered questions the reason it exists. Nobody in the café will ever have those questions answered, and she will never have hers answered either. Curiosity runs both ways, and so does the distance.

Then comes the pivot word, "But." On the porch, "in the evening, in the rain, / everything is simple, clear." The short, plain words are a relief after the clutter of the fragments, and the repeated "in" phrases slow the pace as though she is settling into a chair. The earphones, which were useless in the café, now bring in "a hundred robins singing, / and the peepers in the pond." The word "peepers" imitates the frogs' sound, and it is hard not to hear a quiet joke about peeping on strangers. Here nothing needs to be decoded.

The last line completes a pattern. "Three quarters" in the café was a meaningless scrap, perhaps money, perhaps something else. In the final line it returns as "three-quarters of a mile down the road," a distance exact enough to measure. Sound crosses that whole distance and arrives clearly, while human talk a few feet away does not. The poem never says why she wears earphones, and it doesn't need to.

The poem is significant because it avoids an easy moral. It would be simple to say that nature is honest and people are noise, but most of the poem's lines are about people, and they are warm, funny, and attentive. The quiet ending isn't a verdict on the café. It marks a limit: other lives are partly unreadable, our curiosity about them is shared and slightly lonely, and the pleasure of a clear evening is real without cancelling that. By letting the reader hear the café's jumble as the speaker does, Pratt makes us feel the wish for earphones ourselves.

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