THE PARTING — Summary

They took me in: kind. I took their name; Their Jesus- mark in the center of my forehead. They gave me future; I took it in both my hands: hiding, silence, all of it, the price.

No picture of my parents. I cannot now remember their faces. But the parting:

my mother did not cry. Go, she said, just go. My father would not release my hand. We’ll bring him back the woman said, over and over: I promise. We’ll bring him back. When this is over I promise we’ll bring him back.

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The speaker looks back on being taken in by a family that was not their own, and on the moment of leaving their parents. The opening lines sound grateful: "kind," a new name, a future. But the details quietly undercut that gratitude. The "Jesus-mark" on the forehead suggests a new religion pressed onto the speaker, and the future comes with a cost: "hiding, silence." Judging by these lines, taking the name meant giving up part of who they were.

The second half slows down and becomes more painful. The speaker can no longer remember their parents' faces, yet remembers the parting exactly. The mother, dry-eyed, says only "Go." The father won't let go of the hand. The woman's repeated promise to "bring him back" sounds more desperate each time, and the poem leaves it unanswered. The mood is restrained, sad, and quietly bitter, a loss told in plain, broken sentences.

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