ONE WEDNESDAY AFTERNOON IN MAY — Summary

Mary F. C. PrattMay 19, 1999Cheerful

Rain, the first good soaking since March. Just this morning, I set zinnias and petunias in the deep dry ground, under the heavy sky, hoping.

Later, in the house, with the rain falling steady past the kitchen window, while I waited for banana bread to bake,

the phone rang. It was a farmer I know who called to say that the pregnant onion I gave his wife years ago had a flower on it.

That was all, he said. He just wanted me to know. His corn was planted, hay fields seeded, the onion had a flower. That was all.

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On a rainy May afternoon, the speaker plants flowers, waits for banana bread to bake, and takes a phone call. The call is the heart of it. A farmer she knows rings to say that the onion she once gave his wife has bloomed. He has no other news to share beyond his planted corn and seeded hay fields. "That was all," he says, twice, as if the smallness is the point.

The speaker's feelings are mostly left unspoken, but the details suggest a quiet contentment. She has been "hoping" as she sets her seedlings in dry ground, and the rain answers that hope. The call is another kind of answer: a gift she gave years ago is still alive, and someone cared enough to tell her. The mood is calm, warm and patient. The poem suggests that friendship, like gardening, grows through small, steady gestures, and that an ordinary afternoon can feel complete.

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