WILLOW — Summary

Mary F. C. PrattContemplative

What is the willow writing on the water, one branch bending in the wind, one tip breaking the flat white surface? Does it matter?

Yellow-leafed pond willow, rain’s own daughter, long roots stretch and search and sip. What is the willow writing on the water?

Shattering the mirror the sleek brown otter slides from the slick brown bank, and slips, breaks the flat white surface. Does it matter?

Comprehension, wisdom, nothing will come after the fleeting words are written. Who can keep what the willow is writing on the water?

Every shatter, every ripple, will break and scatter every message from the long yellow branch’s drip breaking the flat white surface. Does it matter?

And who am I to wonder, with my endless chatter, words unconsidered slipping endless from my lips? What is the willow writing on the water, breaking the flat white surface? Does it matter?

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A willow beside a pond becomes a kind of writer. Its branch bends in the wind and its tip touches the surface, and the speaker keeps asking what it is writing, and whether the answer matters. The question returns again and again, like a ripple spreading outward, and the poem's form, with its repeated lines, makes the reader feel that circling.

Nothing in the poem answers the question. An otter breaks the water's surface, and the poem says that ripples will scatter every message before anyone can understand it. The willow's writing is real but fleeting. In the last stanza the speaker turns the question on herself, or himself: human talk, with its "endless chatter" and "words unconsidered," seems just as fleeting and careless. The mood is quiet and wondering, with a touch of humility. The speaker seems to find something beautiful in the willow's brief, unreadable writing, and perhaps a little envy too, since the willow writes without chatter.

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