Incident at Lambert Field — Poem analysis

As I wait by the baggage carousel, a man in a tight shell necklace paces back and forth looking somehow a little odd. I quickly scan for my bag, then return my gaze to the room.

Two women and a white-haired man approach the necklace guy. “I need to be back by 7:50,” he says to their dinner invitation, I suppose. As I turn toward the carousel again, a wild shriek rises behind me.

The man with the shell necklace is holding a phone to his ear, screaming “My God! No! No!” The other three huddle around, cradling him while he sobs.

As the carousel goes around here in this limbo of waiting, the hidden grief of the world has gushed up a few feet away. All who hear the man’s cries are staring while trying not to.

I glance at a woman nearby, raising my arms and shoulders in question, but she only mirrors my gesture. I long to embrace the screamer even while wishing him privacy.

He’s still keening as the two ladies trundle him into a wheelchair and roll him down the hall. The white-haired man remains. I ask him what’s going on.

“My son’s son got killed! A beach accident in Santa Cruz. He’d just graduated high school.” The grandpa looks off in the distance, showing no emotion. I try to give him a hug, but only end up patting one of his shoulder blades.

The two ladies return with another wheelchair for him. I’m left alone, feeling helpless.

The woman with whom I’d connected earlier is still nearby, and now at the very same instant our eyes rise and meet. We walk to each other, embrace, and hold on for dear life.

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Nobody expects anything to happen at a baggage carousel. People stand in a loose ring, watch for their own suitcase, and avoid each other's eyes. Max Reif's "Incident at Lambert Field" opens in that mood of idle vigilance, then lets a stranger's catastrophe break into it. A man in a tight shell necklace paces nearby, and the speaker decides he looks "somehow a little odd" and goes back to scanning for his bag. Moments later the man is screaming into a phone, and the poem becomes an account of how an ordinary person, powerless to fix anything, tries to respond.

The speaker's first judgment is the poem's quiet joke on himself. He sizes the man up by what he can see: a necklace, a nervous walk. He even calls him "the necklace guy." What the speaker could not see was a call about to arrive. The labels keep shrinking the man ("the man with the shell necklace," then "the screamer") until the grandfather's explanation makes him a person. The poem suggests how little a glance can know. There is also an irony the poem never points out. The grandfather says the death was a beach accident, and shells come from beaches. That may be coincidence, but it lingers.

Formally, the poem is free verse with no rhyme and no regular meter, and that suits it. The diction is plain, almost reportorial, and the present tense keeps everything happening in front of us. Reif includes small, flat details such as "I need to be back by 7:50" and the guess about "their dinner invitation." The ordinariness of those details makes the shriek hit harder. Stanza lengths are uneven, as if the poem shapes itself around events rather than a pattern. Several stanzas end on a jolt, like "a wild shriek rises behind me." Enjambment can act out hesitation, as when the speaker is "raising / my arms and shoulders in question," and the line itself seems to lift and hang.

Only once does the poem step back to generalize: "the hidden grief of the world / has gushed up a few feet away." After so much literal description, the verb "gushed" lands with force. It pictures grief as water under pressure, always present beneath the floor of a public room and breaking through without warning. Around it, the poem sets "this limbo of waiting," where the carousel keeps circling indifferently. Then comes a precise and slightly embarrassing observation: everyone is "staring while trying not to." Reif lets us see the awkwardness of a crowd that cares but has no script.

The poem is most honest in its failures. The shrugging exchange with the nearby woman gets only a mirrored shrug, one helpless gesture answered by another. The speaker admits a contradiction: "I long to embrace the screamer / even while wishing him privacy." Then he tries to comfort the grandfather, who looks "off in the distance, / showing no emotion," and the attempt collapses into awkwardness: "I try to give him a hug, / but only end up patting / one of his shoulder blades." That specific, deflating detail keeps the speaker from congratulating himself. The two men also grieve in opposite ways, one keening and one frozen. The poem judges neither.

When the wheelchairs have carried both men away, the speaker is "left alone, feeling helpless." The ending then reverses that. He and the woman from earlier look up "at the very same instant," walk toward each other, and "hold on for dear life." The idiom, usually a throwaway phrase, becomes literal and earned. The embrace the speaker could not give the grieving men is exchanged between two witnesses who have been shaken by a death that was never theirs.

That is what makes the poem matter. It takes seriously a kind of grief we rarely discuss, the secondhand grief of strangers who overhear something terrible. It also refuses a neat moral. The title's word "incident" sounds like an official report and understates everything. Beneath that small word, the poem shows that when we cannot help, we can at least refuse to look away, and sometimes we can hold on to whoever is standing nearest.

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