TRAVEL — Summary

Mary F. C. PrattContemplative

I didn’t much want to go, not caring for adventure, what to expect, imagining

alligator attack, drowning in deep water, some vicious consciousness, so far away from home.

The long train ride, whistles in my sleep, tug away from every thing I knew.

TEN THOUSAND ISLANDS

Because it’s tidal, easy out toward the islands: piles of shells in the shallows.

Mangrove roots red and tangled dripping shells, dripping mandrake-shapes, wading seedlings gathering shells, shell-sand grinding the canoe.

Sand crabs, mysterious digs and arguments. The strangeness of these fish.

Bromeliads arranged and mosses, deep green shades, mosquitoes between the trees. All between the gumbo limbo and mahogany, all along Calusa paths.

Thick water silence, green-gray shell-made clay, islands the mangroves made, Calusa made.

Hours of slow shell-grinding, drip of water from oar, drip from mangrove thick leaf, tangled root. Then easy in, the shallow tide slip gray-green.

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The speaker begins reluctant. She doesn't like adventure, and her mind runs to alligators, deep water, and some vicious presence waiting far from home. The long train ride, with whistles echoing in her sleep, pulls her away from everything familiar.

Then the poem shifts to Ten Thousand Islands, and the fear gives way to close, patient looking. Shells are everywhere: in the shallows, dripping from mangrove roots, grinding under the canoe. The speaker notices sand crabs, strange fish, mosses, bromeliads, and mosquitoes. The Calusa are named as the people who shaped this land alongside the mangroves, which gives the place a deep human past.

The mood turns from anxious to hushed and almost meditative. Repeated words like "drip," "shell," and "grinding" create a slow rhythm, like rowing. The tide that made going out easy also carries her gently back, and the poem ends with the water's calm gray-green. Judging by the contrast, the place has quietly won her over.

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