TRYSTING — Summary

A winding road through the bright-leaved maples, a hillside orchard where a girl sells apples, a brown cow pond with wind stirring ripples.

A narrow path to the river shallows, a strip of pebbles under the willows, a muddy bank where the otter wallows.

The old stone bridge across the water beside the oak where thrushes flutter o’er ghost-white flowers where moths sip nectar.

The village street, dark, with circles of lamplight, a call and a laugh, the squeak of a lychgate, a soft step, a sigh, a quickening heartbeat.

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Read quickly, "Trysting" looks like a simple stroll through the countryside. Only the title tells us there is more going on: a tryst is a secret meeting between lovers, so the journey the poem describes is a journey toward someone.

Each stanza moves us along a little further. We pass maples, an orchard and a pond, then drop down to the river, then cross the old bridge, and finally reach the village street at night. The light fades as we go, from bright leaves to "ghost-white flowers" and moths to lamplight in the dark. The scenes are given in short, bare phrases, with no "I" in sight, yet the speaker seems to notice everything, as if each detail were a step closer.

The last line is where the feeling finally surfaces: "a soft step, a sigh, a quickening heartbeat." The mood builds from calm and pleasant to hushed, then to nervous excitement and anticipation.

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