PLUMAGE — Summary

Mary F. C. PrattContemplative

To have without acquisition: The new hat, but not on the head, only the eye seduced with plumage.

Great Egret dressed in lace and masked in green, Green Heron wing, Little Blue Heron blue, Purple Gallinule: purple feathers, bill red and lavender.

Guy Bradley gave his life, shot in the back on the shell-shored island. Plumes worth more than gold.

Now they stand unconcerned, preening, across the water among the trees. Not enough water, the long grass river not long enough, but enough for now.

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The poem opens with a strange idea: wanting a beautiful thing without owning it. The "new hat" alludes to feathered fashion, and the speaker suggests the eye can be satisfied by plumage alone, without it ever sitting on a head. The second stanza then becomes a kind of roll call of birds, each named and colored with obvious delight: egret, heron, gallinule.

Then the tone darkens. Guy Bradley, named plainly, is "shot in the back on the shell-shored island," and the line "Plumes worth more than gold" hints at the greed that made feathers deadly. The poem suggests, judging by these lines, that he died protecting birds.

The ending is quiet and cautious. The birds now "stand unconcerned, preening," but the speaker worries about the shrinking river: "Not enough water... but enough for now." The mood moves from admiration to grief to a wary, tentative relief.

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