a tiny gazetteer — Poem analysis

Mary F. C. PrattApril 10, 2014Contemplative

Ostrowy, Poland.

Broken bannister painted brown.

Somewhere in Quebec:

Three-eighths mystery.

Albany, Vermont

Two sons, their separate ways.

Charlotte, Vermont.

Nothing but the garden.

Cleveland, Ohio.

Live geese in a basket;

Bavarian china on layaway.

Stowe, Vermont.

Pasture ghosts.

The wrath of trees.

Portland, Maine.

The freedom of the uniform.

New Guinea.

Crash and shatter.

Newport, Vermont.

Not dancing at the Inaugural Ball.

St. Johnsbury, Vermont.

First light.

First fear.

St. Albans, Vermont.

One lonely field.

Essex Junction, Vermont.

How the stars came out.

Burlington, Vermont.

The bottom of Lake Champlain.

Essex Junction, Vermont.

Walking a different way.

Johnson, Vermont.

One butterfly with stunted wings

Castleton, Vermont

Promises.

The mantle falls.

Keelogues, Ireland.

Cemetery filled

with familiar names.

Warsaw, Poland.

Three tables.

New Haven, Vermont.

Red oak.

Deep blue clay.

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A gazetteer is a dictionary of places: names, facts, nothing wasted. Mary F. C. Pratt's "a tiny gazetteer" borrows that dry, practical shape and fills every entry with something no reference book would record, such as a broken bannister, a fear, or a lonely field. The territory it maps is memory. Each entry pairs a place with a fragment, and the reader has to work out what connects them.

The poem never says whose life this is, or whether it is one life or several. Judging by the names, though, the journey runs from Poland and Ireland to a long settlement in Vermont, with detours to Ohio, Maine and New Guinea. Poland appears at the start and again near the end, as if the map loops back on itself. Vermont towns dominate the middle, and Essex Junction turns up twice, once with "How the stars came out" and once with "Walking a different way." A place can be revisited and mean something new.

There is no rhyme and no regular metre. The rhythm comes from the repeating pattern of name, full stop, short phrase, which works like a pulse. The clipped lines sound final, like drawers shut one after another. Against that, "Cemetery filled / with familiar names" is the only entry that spills over a line break, as though this one subject will not fit into a single breath. A few lines also lose their closing punctuation, "One butterfly with stunted wings" among them, and they feel faintly unfinished.

The imagery is concrete and domestic. "Broken bannister painted brown" is a repair that hides the damage instead of mending it, which could stand for a whole way of coping. "Live geese in a basket; / Bavarian china on layaway" puts a farmyard beside an aspiration. Layaway means paying in instalments for something you cannot yet take home, so the delicate china becomes a picture of wanting and waiting. "Three-eighths mystery" applies the precision of a fraction to something that cannot be measured. I read it as a gap in knowledge, perhaps about family or origins, though the poem does not explain it.

Many entries are defined by what is absent. There is "Nothing but the garden," "Not dancing at the Inaugural Ball," and "Two sons, their separate ways." Even the brightest line, "First light. First fear.", pairs a dawn with a dread, and the repeated "First" makes them feel inseparable. Some of the harshest phrases are the briefest: "Pasture ghosts. / The wrath of trees." turns a landscape into something haunted and angry. "The freedom of the uniform" in Portland, Maine, is followed by "Crash and shatter" in New Guinea. The poem does not say what crashed, but the sequence lets us hear a story of service and its cost. "Promises. / The mantle falls." echoes the biblical image of a cloak passing from one prophet to the next, and here it suggests the handing down of responsibility.

The ending is carefully chosen. After the graveyard and "Warsaw, Poland. / Three tables," the last entry is "New Haven, Vermont. / Red oak. / Deep blue clay." It names no person and no feeling, only a tree and the ground beneath it. Whether the clay suggests roots, burial or both, the poem finishes on material that endures after the people and their stories have gone.

The poem matters for how much it trusts its reader. It has no narrator explaining and no dates to anchor the events. It offers a few precise, strange details and lets us build the rest, the way we fill in a photograph that has lost its caption. It also shows that a life is often remembered less as a plot than as a set of places, each holding one sharp image. After reading it, you might try your own tiny gazetteer. Choose five places you know, and for each one find the single phrase that only you would have written.

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