INCONGRUOUS — Summary

My mother keeps falling down; I can’t find my littlest flashlight.

The gray cat is suddenly dead; I have poison parsnip burns.

My mother doesn’t always know where she is; the moon in its first quarter is tangled in the oak.

We’re a month from the Equinox and the low battery light on my mouse blinks red.

My mother doesn’t want to see the doctor. When I was making supper, I burned the rice.

Weeds have spread through the garden bed; do I still believe in god?

My mother didn’t recognize me this morning; I took another photo of the setting sun.

Mice are picking at the ripening tomatoes and Jupiter burns through the sky before dawn.

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The title says it: these couplets don't fit together, and that's the point. Each one pairs a piece of the speaker's mother's decline with something small, unrelated, or just nearby. She keeps falling, she gets lost, she doesn't recognize her own child. Beside these facts sit a missing flashlight, a burned supper, a low mouse battery, a photo of the sunset.

The speaker never says how she feels. The pairings do it for her. Ordinary life carries on, with its chores and garden pests and seasons turning, while something huge is happening at home. The odd leaps suggest a mind that can't hold the grief directly, so it grabs at whatever is close. The question "do I still believe in god?" drops in with no more weight than the weeds, which makes it feel even more raw.

The mood is quiet, watchful, and a little numb, with fear underneath. The repeated burning, from parsnip, rice, and Jupiter, hints at a pain that keeps flaring up.

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