IN THE BERRY PATCH, PRETENDING NOT TO LISTEN — Summary

A large woman in a pink vest and a red straw hat said I said that’s no way to treat your mother, I said, even though it’s none of my business, I said, but still. And she apologized to Bob and I, and I said that’s okay, but I said I wish you’d think before you talk, I said.

And a grandmother enthusiastically explained When we get home we’ll read Blueberries for Sal and this time you’ll really appreciate it, except that here there are no bears. And the child said No bears? And she said Oh, not really. Ah, but there are bears. Right here. They move through the berries, disguised, picking and stuffing, whatever they like. There is one across from you, for example, you’re looking toward her right now in the very next row. She is picking, all absorbed, it would it seem, by the fruit. But Daddy saw footprints. . . You kids get over here. . . What dear? No, I’m not finished yet. . . . I’m too hot. I’m going back to the shade. . . Last time I saw you, you couldn’t climb the bus steps. . . We don’t have time today because you need a haircut. . . And I said, the next time you come, I said. . . And solemn, my eyes on my work, I picked and picked, the blue bucket tied around my waist, both paws busy between the leaves, taking in quarts and quarts of the stuff, determined to gather every little bit before the winter hush.

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The speaker is picking berries and, without seeming to, overhearing everyone around her. Scraps of conversation drift past: a woman retelling a scolding she gave, a grandmother promising to read *Blueberries for Sal*, a parent brushing off a child, someone remarking how much a visitor has grown. Most of it is ordinary family business, half-finished and a little sharp.

The best moment comes when the grandmother tells the child there are bears after all, hidden among the pickers. The speaker is clearly the bear she means, "across from you" in the next row, seemingly absorbed in fruit. Then she plays along. In the closing lines she is "solemn," with "both paws / busy," gathering quarts "before the winter hush."

The mood is quiet, wry and a little wistful. The speaker stays apart from the talk around her, amused by it but also an outsider. Her bear-like hoarding suggests she is storing up more than berries, perhaps these overheard scraps of other people's lives, against a lonelier season.

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