COMING TOWARD HOME — Summary

I want to love things all by myself, not looking sidelong to see if others are loving them, too: the sky like old blue glass held in by a tracery of trees, the great horned owl’s cynical question– Who’s awake? the falling cold stars of snow.

One night I snowshoed in the woods alone, the full moon lamplight gleaming through the lace of soft snow clouds. Coming toward home I saw in the frame of an uncurtained window the painting of a summer orchard above my piano against the green wall, my husband moving across the kitchen with his teacup. I thought I would break for joy.

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The speaker begins with a wish: to love the world on her own terms, without glancing over to check whether anyone else is admiring it too. She then lists what she loves, and the images are vivid and a little wry: a sky like old blue glass, an owl whose hoot sounds like a cynical question, snowflakes like falling cold stars.

Then the poem turns to a single night. She snowshoes alone through the woods under a bright moon, and the scene feels quiet and almost silvery. On the way back, she looks through an uncurtained window and sees her own home from the outside: a painting, her piano, and her husband crossing the kitchen with a teacup. Ordinary things suddenly look like a framed picture. The ending is strong and simple: "I thought I would break for joy."

The mood moves from solitary, watchful calm to warm, overflowing happiness. The poem suggests that time alone in nature can make the people and places we love feel newly precious.

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