REPORT: OCTOBER 20, 2020 — Summary

Mary F. C. PrattContemplative

Dark clouds over Buck Mountain.

It will rain.

More sugar-maple leaves on the ground than on the trees.

The oaks and popples are turning.

Soybean fields amber, hay fields cut and green.

Luke’s old milking shed is falling apart.

It’s just a storage shed now,

with the old SURGE and AG JOURNAL signs rusting on the wall

and the little lightning rods standing bravely on the roof.

Last year, a young man took the bend in the road too fast

and the laws of physics being what they are,

he glanced off a telephone pole and ran into the shed.

And died. One of the dead

elms has fallen. Now it’s raining,

and taking pity on the dog, I turn.

Sumac is mostly red along the east side of the road.

If it were colder, I’d swear it was snowing in the mountains.

Jim’s VETERANS AGAINST TRUMP flag is up on his porch.

At the far end of her pasture, his old horse Molly crops the grass.

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

Written like a dated field report, the poem records one walk on a rainy October day in 2020: dark clouds, fallen maple leaves, amber soybean fields, red sumac. The speaker sounds calm and observant, listing what she sees in short, plain sentences. But the list quietly gathers loss. The old milking shed is falling apart, a dead elm has come down, and a young man died when his car hit the shed. That death is told flatly, almost in passing, which makes it hit harder.

The mood is wistful and watchful rather than openly sad. Small touches of tenderness, like the lightning rods "standing bravely" and the speaker turning back out of pity for the dog, soften the decay. The mention of Jim's anti-Trump flag places the walk in a particular, tense moment, though the poem doesn't comment on it. It ends on Molly the old horse, still grazing, a quiet image of life carrying on among endings.

Read also

More by Mary F. C. Pratt

All poems
SadMary F. C. Pratt

AFTER THE FLOOD

What have the sunflowers lost? Look at them all, heads bent down heavy, anxiously, earnestly searching the ground. Or maybe they hear Persephone
CheerfulMary F. C. Pratt

REVOLUTION

Every spring she lifted the carpet in the lounge where the old boys sat drinking their single-malts.
DreamyMary F. C. Pratt

THE PLACE

There is deep water running underneath, and far beneath the blue clay the stone body of a great fish, and deeper still the shards