OPEN STUDIO POEM #12 — Poem analysis

Mary F. C. PrattContemplative

Have patience, my friends. There is no need to run, to roar, to ricochet from hard place to rock.

Practice being silent instead. Sit still, hibernate your mind. Go stand in the snow. Listen to the stars.

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Eight short lines, and nearly every one of them is an instruction. Mary F. C. Pratt's "OPEN STUDIO POEM #12" sounds like a friend leaning over at a frantic moment to say: slow down. Its central idea is that patience is not passive waiting but something you can do, even something you can rehearse: "Practice being silent instead." The title suggests a creative workspace, and the number twelve hints at a series, but the text alone tells us no more than that. Still, "practice" would sit comfortably in any studio, where skill comes from repetition rather than sudden inspiration.

The first stanza states the thesis, "Have patience, my friends," and then describes the opposite. The verbs come in a rising list: "to run, / to roar, to ricochet." All three start with the same hard r, and each is wilder than the last. A person runs, an animal roars, but a ricochet is what a bullet does, bouncing off surfaces with no control over where it lands. The panicked person has become a projectile. The stanza ends with a twist on a familiar saying: "from hard place to rock." The usual idiom is "between a rock and a hard place," which describes being trapped. Pratt turns it into travel. The restless person doesn't escape the predicament but carries it along, hopping from one difficulty to the next. The reshuffled phrase is also a small joke, and it keeps the advice from sounding like a lecture.

The word "instead" is the hinge, and the sound of the poem changes with it. The first stanza is full of hard consonants (run, roar, ricochet, hard, rock). The second hushes into sibilance: "silent," "sit still," "stand," "snow," "stars." You can hear the poem lowering its voice. There is no rhyme and no regular metre, but the lines are measured. They run from five to eight syllables, and the second stanza narrows as it goes, from the eight syllables of "Practice being silent instead" down to five each in "Go stand in the snow" and "Listen to the stars." The stanza quiets down as you read it.

The imagery rewards a slower look. "Hibernate your mind" uses a verb that normally describes animals, and it takes an object, as though the mind were something you could put to bed for the winter. Hibernation is not death but a way of saving energy, so the phrase suggests that stillness is restorative, not empty. "Go stand in the snow" begins with a verb of motion but ends in standing, which neatly undoes the earlier "run." Snow also muffles sound and sharpens attention with its cold, so it is the right place to practise silence. Then comes the most paradoxical line, "Listen to the stars." Stars make no audible sound, so the instruction can't be literal. What you would hear is the quiet itself, and perhaps your own thoughts settling. It may be coincidence, but "silent" and "listen" are made of exactly the same letters, as if silence and listening were one thing rearranged.

What makes the poem worth reading is that it shows rather than argues. Pratt never explains why patience is good. She gives a picture of frantic motion and a sequence of cold, quiet images, and lets us feel the difference. The scale also shifts. The poem begins with an agitated, bouncing body and ends looking up at the night sky, so the cure for panic is a wider view as well as a slower pace. The warmth of "my friends" matters too, because it turns each command into an invitation rather than an order.

The form also practises what the poem preaches. It is brief, and it leaves white space around its lines, a kind of silence on the page. It can be read in seconds, but its last image lingers, and that is a good lesson in how much a poem can do without raising its voice.

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